Pages Edited into Final Pieces

This is my front cover of which I received my feedback on therefore I worked with it in order to get a better cover:

 

This is my cover during the cover construction process. I feel that I need to add some design elements:

I feel that this layout didn't work and that there was too much white space therefore I edited this by adding new coverlines which included both music and other lifestyle issues and changing them around.

This is my contents page of which I received feedback on; I have edited accordingly:

From my feedback I edited the contents but I still feel that I need to get rid of the white space:

This is the DPS in which I got my feedback on:

 

Taking the feedback into consideration I edited it to this. The bottom photo is my final DPS.