ORIGINAL Final Pieces Feedback

Cover lines all good except from '50 summer dresses' of which looks out of place.

- straplines are bad as they blend in with the background; white would be better. 

- title font massively differs from all other fonts but it looks big and bold.

- not keen on red background; perhaps a lighter shade would be more suitable.

- cover lines don't look crowded which is good. 

- colour scheme is good.

- dominating photo.

 - maybe centred text under 'Shona'.

- barcode is too large.

- fonts are too similar.

- good picture.

Cover and contents has no house style; needs more red.
- font does not comply with front cover.

- weakest page as it is too spacious.
- needs more sophistication. 

- needs a page number.

House style achieved on contents and double page spread.
- numbers comply with contents page.
- page numbers are too big.
- good colour scheme.
- article is well written.
- pull quotes are good.
- good layout and use of columns.
- work on the edit of the photo.
- could include silver from the flowers.
- make the title go across the top.

- good picture.

- font looks good.

- title looks good.

- could use more design elements.

- could add drops caps.

- pink pull quote looks out of place.

- too spacious.

- no intro means the artist isn't introduced. 

- no conclusion/goodbye.

- website looks random at the bottom of the page, doesn't fit in.